Decent mix.
This is a pretty decent mix. You have some interesting sounds in there. The percussion is definitely the right stuff for classic industrial. :) There are melodies that don't really work or don't really go anywhere, and this song is more of a collage of individual melody parts, rather than a cohesive whole which builds up and breaks down. It's not bad, just needs more of a flow. OR, this song would work extremely well if it just had some good vocals (I'm thinking Velvet Acid Christ-type vocals). :D If you get the chance, I'd love to hear a vocal mix! :)
danke
le fishtank
ps. You should totally review one of my songs. :D (if you do, please try to be constructive)
4/5, 7/10, and a kiss *mwah*